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The Tambo & Wally Paper: A Guide: Thesis Statement

A list of references and tools to help you successfully navigate and complete your US History I 1800s research paper

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 A step by step guide on how to develop your thesis statement for your paper. Remember, you thesis must be clear and debatable. For a quick overview of key elements your thesis statement should have - check out this useful infographic 

Writing a Thesis Statement


CLAIM that you are stating about your topic that you would like to PROVE through research.

What were the causes? Its effects? What statement or conclusion can we make about it?


When developing a thesis statement, keep in mind that a well-developed thesis statement...

  • defines the focus of your research project: Your thesis statement helps readers to know the specific subject matter you will be addressing within the broad topic (i.e.: environmental disasters, as the example demonstrates).

  • provides critical information about your project by defining the focus of your research, its scope, and your motivation, 

  • can set boundaries to help you figure out where to go next, 

  • helps you figure out what types of sources you need to collect and analyze.

So how do you develop a “well-developed” thesis statement? Here are some basic guidelines:

  • Make sure your statement isn’t too broad

    • Example: The impact of environmental disasters in the United States

  • Make sure your question isn’t so specific that it can be answered by a quick internet search

    • Example: The causes of the Dust Bowl during the 1930s

  • Make sure your question is something that can be debated - not all research may agree with you, which gives you the chance to prove your point.

    • Example 1:  Wide-spread erosive farming practices, in combination with the government subsidized settlement established by the Homestead Act, resulted in the ecological phenomena of the Dust Bowl. (policy's effect on the environment)

    • Example 2: As a result of an inability to farm the land due to the ecological conditions of the Dust Bowl, many workers seeked refuge in California, altering the population and infrastructure of the state. (migration and policy)

    • Example 3: Poor living conditions during the Dust Bowl and public spending through New Deal programs, caused a decrease in the demand for agricultural child-labor and an increase in education for America's youth. (education)